Keeping It Simple

  This design is certainly more subtle and unadorned! I've included more of the wording you submitted, but I do think we will need to revisit the wording with our first revision, just to make sure you're happy with it. This particular script/font is easy to read and bolder, which was a desire you mentioned in the consult. Going with the simpler design would be a good choice if you wanted the laser cut to speak for itself!

This design is certainly more subtle and unadorned! I've included more of the wording you submitted, but I do think we will need to revisit the wording with our first revision, just to make sure you're happy with it. This particular script/font is easy to read and bolder, which was a desire you mentioned in the consult. Going with the simpler design would be a good choice if you wanted the laser cut to speak for itself!

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